It was a normal day at the dig red Industry it was raining hard like always not sunny and foggy. Anyways all the people that live there did not like to live there the roomer has it the it is honed with the people that worked there they were always afraid that they would get evacuated as the day went on it rained harder and harder.One of the family members thot that they hade to act urgently people came and T told them that the lights went out I was Scared they needed help everyone decided that they would move.
Hello Claire, this is an interesting story. I like how you used the picture to inspire you to create a fictional piece of writing. Some further punctuation would have helped make the reading of your story clearer but I liked how you created an atmosphere by the consistent rain and the fear of the narrator.